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Akkiriya - Chapter 16 : Brush With Death

Sun Aug 2, 2009, 7:45 PM
Three miles from the castle, it happened.
Akkiriya had been just fine, riding alongside Brandin, Chris, and Nikolas. She was listening to her iPod, humming to some theme song or another. She was still sad about Adriel, how could she ever recover from that? But she was confident about going to Kyrea. She knew her daughter would be avenged.
Up and humming one minute. Then heck broke loose.
She knew something was wrong, but she couldn't do anything about it. She felt herself slipping, falling, crashing to the ground. She heard the worried screams from the others as the rushed help her.
But her world was black. She writhered and cringed in pain. It felt like she was being ripped apart, torn from her body, crushed under pressure. She saw red, bright red light, and immediantly began trying to fight it. But her effort was useless. The light engulfed her, crushed her, ripped her.
Then it was over. She started hearing the other's words more clearly, more sharply. She forced her eyelids open, but didn't get very far. The pain was unbearable. So she laid there, defeated, shivering, cold...
Scared.
And she didn't even know if it had been real.
Numbly, she felt herself being lifted onto her horse, then felt the warmth of another body pressing against her back, supporting her. She felt the hosre move, felt the wind across her face.
"Hold on, Kiri," she heard a faint voice whisper. "Don't die."
But before she could even reply, she was asleep. She at least deserved that much. She knew she had had a brush with death.
The first of many to come.

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I'm working on becoming an author. I've already finished one story, titled "Akkiriya" (hence the account name), and I'm currently working on a new book called "The Day We Die". I'll posting one chapter a day, every day I can. I hope everyone likes it! :)
P.S. - In my journal entries, if you see dates out of order (i.e. chapter 2 - July first, chapter 3 - june 30), it's okay! i'm constantly making revisions, and when I do, the date changes to the date i made the revisions. So don't be alarmed!!! :) Also, if you find journal entries missing in the list, they aren't gone!! you just have to scrool through the pages of my journal to find them. Sorry about that, but I didn't know it did that. :(
Also, and this is IMPORTANT!!!!, i'm making one more change at the end of the book that you'll just have to wait for. So, my friends know i listen mainly to soundtrack music. WELL, i had the idea of putting my chapters.....to songs. SO, at the end of all this, i'll find a song that fits it perfectly, and I'll go back through and post journal entry of all the songs. So, be ready for the songs! :) lol

Just another note - with school coming up, i won't be able to update chapters as much, maybe every 2 weeks. BUT, my friends at school have access to 2 important things: 1- ME! :) , and 2- my OTHER copy of the book (one i think is considerably better). But, for now, just BEAR WITH ME!!!

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  • Current Residence: Grandma's House/My House
  • Interests: Piano, writing
  • Favourite movie: Harry Potter, Star Wars, Star Trek, Help!
  • Favourite band or musician: John Williams, The Beatles
  • Favourite genre of music: Soundtrack
  • Favourite artist: Anyone who draws fantasy
  • Favourite poet or writer: J.K. Rowling , Pallas on the MuggleNet FanFiction BETA bords (check out A Little More Time!)
  • Favourite style of art: Fantasy/Futuristic
  • MP3 player of choice: blue iPod video, 8G
  • Wallpaper of choice: Any collage that i put together on Paint
  • Favourite game: Guitar Hero - World Tour
  • Favourite gaming platform: Wii
  • Personal Quote: "NOBODY expects the Spanish Inquisition!!"

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emilyyyyyyyyy.... hellloooooo???? omg my voice i$ echoing)

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:iconprincessakkiriya:
hey, are you on? i'm also gonna get on im
:iconprincessakkiriya:
sorry, i typed another chapter. g2g grandpa made turkey bacon. wohoo!!!!! *runs off and grabs, like, 10 pieces*
:iconpuppyprincess13:
i think u were online an hour ago. UGH

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:iconprincessakkiriya:
I'm here! my grandpa was in the room. the internet is telling me it has to close this page, so i'll be back in, like, 2 minutes. kk? :)

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